What do you fan boys think of my fan fiction on how I would have had the Punisher in Spiderman film 1st???

wanted to put this here because people who liked Spiderman 2 and hated 3, your opinions mean alot to me whether you hate it or like my idea for how Spiderman 3 should have went. I'm open to anything you have to say to me.








This is the way SPiderman 3 should have went in my eyes. Not only is this my version of Spiderman 3, but it's also my version of a true Punisher reboot. This movie would have been the first to ever feature the comic book character, The Punisher before he is in his own movies since he began as a SPiderman sub character. So here it is. The plot would be Peter is trying to think of a way to propose to MJ. While walking throuch Central park one night, a comit hits about 5 miles away. Peter goes to investegate. The symbiot sneeks into his backpack. Then he goes to see MJ's new play. After it is done, everyone apllaus with joy at her performance and him and MJ go back stage to plan a dinner. After that, on his way home in the alley, Peter gets ambushed by Harry in his Green Goblin costume. Underestimating SPiderman, Harry gets defeated and is badly injured. Peter goes home and sleeps and that when the symbiot merges into him. Next morning, police sirens go off and we cut to the next scene where 2 criminals are running through a house thats abandoned. It is revealed that they are running from a guy in a one peice black armored suit with a white skull on his chest and wearing white combat boots with white gloves(Punisher's classic suit). One guy bails out a window and the other gets caught up by Punisher. As P is about to extract private justice on the man, the floor breaks beneath the criminal and he falls to the first floor conveantly(spelling) in front of the cops. Peter goes into work and is introduced to a new employee. A big muscled bound man named Eddie Brock. As with Harry, he is now building a new amor suit and upgrading weapons while recovering from a broken leg. He wants vengence on SPiderman. However, he realizes he might not have to do the deed directly. With the military connections he has, he goes to an ex specail op who recommends him a number to a man named micro chip. Harry comes up with a plan to incriminate SPiderman to make it look legit. He sends info that SPiderman has been using his status of trust from the city to undergoe his own enterprise and take money from charities and banks. Micro chip sends all this information to The Punisher. Next night, police sirens go off and Peter chooses his new black outfit to go fight crime. Since this black outfit brings out the ungliness in him, he beats 3 criminals nearly to death. Acting out of character, he retreats to a side of a skyscrapper to look at the engagement ring that he wants to give to MJ. Thinking about what is happening to him, a gun shot goes off. A bullet misses his head by inches. Followed by an arsonall of gun fire, SPiderman leaps around for safety. He goes to a roof top, but not to his knowledge, triggers off a nearby anti personel mine. It explodes and the force knocks SPiderman on his back leaving him disoriented. He sees a figure appraoch him with a gun fixing on his head. He says, "who are you?!" SPiderman's senses go off allowing him to dodge an oncomming bullet and he sweaps the man on his back and flings a web at him. "Look buddy! I don't know what your game is but you need a time out!" Quickly, The Punisher shoots SPiderman with a dart coated with a lethal venom which because of SPiderman's body chemestry, only weakens him to a normal human strength which aloows the Punisher to undergo hand to hand combat with SPiderman in which he wipes the floor with the inexperienced kid. Then the venom wears off and at full strength, SPiderman punches the Punisher 15 feets away from him. The 2 not being able to out do eachother, part ways that night. In work, Peter and Eddie are trying to get a story from a man who knows the wearabouts of a psychopathic killer(not the punisher). Peter recommends that Eddie just take the story and shows him who to go to(not knowing the man he directs him to is just a blabbering idiot). After Eddie gets the story, Joan Jameson wants the story of a New York vigilanty covered and also finds out that the coverage Eddie comes up with is fake and has him fired. Eddie hating PEter for is direction will play a part in the 4th where it is Eddie's ark when he finds out A: he has cancer, B: his father disowns him, and C: he comes in contact with the symbiot. When The Punisher spots Spiderman again…. The two square off in an even longer battle. This time, (Nod to the comic book), the Punisher has constructed a device which are attached to his wrists that sling material similar to Spiderman’s web and even manages to return the favor and cocoon him in it. Spiderman breaks out after struggling, and the fight continues. Now however, terrorists have taken over a bridge and are olding people hostage nearby. Spiderman and The Punisher give each other a look which represents a silent temporary truce for them to team up and overtake the terrorists on the bridge and save the innocents. After everyone is saved, Punisher fixes his attention on Spiderman. As he reaches or his gun, a child comes up to the skulled vigilante and grabs his hand. The one that not holding a gun odviously. Looking around him, surrounded by bystanders, gives Spiderman a look basically saying, “Next Time”.Peter, after the fight on the bridge, nearly killed to o the bad guys by beating them severily and realizes that all this bad energy has come from the symbiot. A church bell goes off and Peter sense that the suit is uncomfortable with it. Later that night, Peter comes up with the idea of maybe that can be a way to get rid of the symbiot. He goes to church and hits the bell over and over until the creature seperates itself from him. Then it faster than light, disappears into the darkness (cliffhaner scene for the 4th movie). After all is done, Peter goes to Aunt May. While all this is happening, after what MJ has seen on the news about ho Spiderman and an unknown male in a body armored outfit, saved people on a bridge after a tremendous gun fight. She recongnizes the man from the image caught on fan cam. She saw him at Central Park one day. Just standing in the middle of the playground with a ghostly look on his face. She then does something both brave and on the lines of stupidity and gets herself attacked by a couple of thugs in an alley somewhere and The Punisher comes out and saves her. He then takes her home as she is out of breath and scared by the occurrence. Upon arrival at MJ’s home, Frank sees pictures of Peter and MJ as kids, pictures when they were in highschool. )This is my attempt to connect both Peter and Frank on a personal level. Something Sam Rami failed to achieve with Spiderman and Sandman.) Frank looks at a picture of Peter when he was a young boy. The picture was on MJ’s burea(spelling). It reminds him of his son. As he is leaving the house, MJ stops him mid-way. She confronts him about Spiderman and why this man is out to kill him. (I’m not sure how this scene would play out in terms of dialoge, but it’s a pivotal scene the two share together and it’s when it hits home for Frank that he was being used mearly as a tool by the man who hired him. After that, the next time the 2 meet, Punisher tells him that he has been dooped into believe Spiderman was a criminal and seems to be remorsefull about it at the same time wanting blood from Harry Osborne. Spiderman askes him again, who he is. The man responds, my name is Frank Castle. The 2 team up in order to find Harry who is not at home. Harry has completed his Hob Goblin suit and has captured Joan Jameson and Gwan Stacy(he does'nt catpure MJ because they are friends and does'nt want to put her in harms way. So he goes for other people Peter would want to help.) The climatic battler sequence between SPider/Punisher vs. Hobgoblin would be about 12 minutes of breath taking epic action leaving Harry wounded in the gut by a armor piercing bullet and SPiderman swing kicking him to the ground. As Harry lays there bleeding but survivable, Frank and Spiderman go and rescue Jaon and Gwen who are hangin from a rope 100 feet above the ground. After they have them to safety, Spiderman goes to see if Harry is still alive. As Peter removes Harry's Hobgoblin mask, a sound of a shotgun cock snaps.....








Punisher: Step aside Parker.


Frank’ bloodlust is at a boiling point here.





Spiderman: No!





Punisher: Step aside or ill....


He is interrupted by Peter





Peter: Or you'll kill me?





Punisher looks confused and sorrowfull as to how to react towards the kid..





Peter: It’s now their job.


Looking into the forground. The oncoming police lights.


A look of anger and dread appears on Frank's face.





Peter: To murder makes us no better than criminals who roam the city.





Now at this point, if any1 has the soundtrack to Spiderman 2, the track called “Train/Appreciation” at the 2:10 minute marker where Danny Elfman’s score could be used for a sad emotional scene as well. Just imagine that playing as Frank explains his story to Peter.








Frank: It wasn’t always like this. I didn’t want this. I had a family once. Twelve years ago, they were gunned down by the Gambino brothers after a mob hit went down in Central Park while we were celebrating my return from my tour of duty in Desert Storm. It was random. I should have died too. Took enough bullets. I awoke from a coma 3 weeks later to find out my wife Maria and daughter Janice were pronounced dead on the scene and Frank Jr, my son, died later in the ER. I was told the police had the men in custody and were waiting for me to regain full strength to testify. When the time came, I gave my testimony. But the judge let them off on a technecality. I snapped. I realized the judicible systems that was designed to protect us is flawed and inadequate(spelling). That night, I payed the Gambinos a visit and made sure they never saw the light of day again. I doned this skull as a symbol of death and a way to distract enemies from shooting vital places. White and black. Both mean death. I promise to deliver. I don't expect you to understand the gravity of the situation.





Flashes of Peter’s Uncle now appears as he thinks of how he wanted nothing but to kill the man responsible for taking Uncle Ben away.





Peter: I can uderstand. I lost an Uncle. He was like a father to me





Frank: Although, under false pretences, I tried to kill you. I'm not expecting you to forgive me. It was horrible. I'm sorry.





Peter: I do forgive.





Frank: I owe you this much. I wont stand in your way in taking your friend to the authorites. Maybe the system this time wont fail.





Peter gives him a nod of graditude.





MJ leaves Peter’s side to go confront Frank who is walking away into the night.





MJ: Wait!!!!!





Frank stops and looks back.





MJ: You were given a second chance. Frank.





Frank: Frank Castle is dead. He died with his family. I am The Punisher.





Peter comes to MJ’s side. MJ teary eyes, now solks on Peter’s shoulder as the police come to take Harry away.




















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What do you fan boys think of my fan fiction on how I would have had the Punisher in Spiderman film 1st???
It's pretty good. I'd be interested in reading more. You could probably flesh it out a bit with some more dialogue and detail in descriptions of the settings where the scenes take place, etc. or get somebody to do it for you.


I always thought the lizard was going to be in 3 but maybe he'll be in part 4, with carnage and the black cat.

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